Well, her helmet and chest piece isn't intended to be fused together, it just kinda turned out that way.
This is the original sketch that I had: [link] , as you can see it also included chainmail for the exposed spots- unfortunately I wasn't able to get the chainmail to look right. As for her wings, they style is based off of a Pokemon named Skarmory. So it works by cartoon logic I suppose.
Thank you for your critique however! It's greatly appreciated!
I see, I think if you had managed to get the chainmail in there somehow, it wouldve looked better. She just feels very stiff now. Her helmet however still gives me a bit of a worry, how did she get it on? It looks like metal melted around her face.